Reading Notes: Eskimo Folk Tales Part B

Visual representation of Atldarneq's meal: Image

Atldarneq

Finally, a story that make some sense. Atldarneq is shown to have gluttonous tendencies (he was never content with just one of anything) and these tendencies end up getting him into trouble. Copper-cheeks punishes him for these flaws by making him eat ungodly amounts of food. There is a clear lesson in this story and a story progression that actually makes sense. I still don't understand the part about the stalk of grass though? Like, apparently you can just eat a stalk of grass before eating a big meal and then you'll just never get full? Then that part is just glossed over and never explained. I do think that this makes Atldarneq get off kind of easily however, as he really suffers no penalty for his gluttony and just leaves the house and never comes back. If I rewrote this story, I would probably have Atldarneq receive a longer-lasting punishment so that he serves as an example of what not to do in order to highlight the story's lesson further.

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